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Wow, love this and your sweet voice! Here are my thoughts on the verse choice. World unraveling may be a bit dark but day is unraveling just doesn't quite carry the weight needed to keep this song's poignancy. You could keep it vague like "it's all unraveling" or just keep the world verse. There is a beautiful native american tale where a woman weaver (who makes the world) has her piece accidentally unravelled by her dog. She does not get upset. She simply begins weaving a new tapestry even more beautiful than before. I love what you are saying about knitting together with eachother strong. Weirdly in these tough times i do feel more closely with my community.

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